Wow, this is stunning! I love the journey it goes on and the way in which it expresses the feeling and then explores it more with example. Great writing!
Great poem! Thank you for sharing. I grew up on all those same songs. I grew up on that “worry” as well. It’s always a journey to say goodbye to it. Bless you! Keep writing. We need you. 🙏❤️
The way you play with words and create sentences inspires me and makes me feel so deeply. Always so grateful for your poetry. 🥲
What a lovely comment to read. Thanks so much Jennae!
Such a beautiful read!
Thanks so much Amanda!
Worry is a killer, and many times we have unnecessary worries. A calm existence is precious for it gives us peace.
You have many lines in this of which I could say much, but it would take so much space and time that I will pass. Good read!
'he believes our hearts into lifting
into loving
again and again'
Love these lines. How someone else's belief allows us to believe in ourselves.
That's it Treasa! And what beautiful soothe and encouragement it is.
so beautiful ahhh! the trees hold my hand too! This is a hot-chocolate poem, that means to say it feels so good, so warm, so tasty
Thank you Mohika, hadn't heard of a hot chocolate poem before!
Wow, this is stunning! I love the journey it goes on and the way in which it expresses the feeling and then explores it more with example. Great writing!
(Is it though... ?) I'm on that journey too. Thanks David!
Beautiful poem.
Thanks Harun!
"tell me that thing again— that you love me
every which way you do"
Yes, presence and love. ❤️
Thanks @Sarah Howard Lapine this presence thing, in us and in others. It seems to do so much.
Absolutely. And some days it's so much harder to stay there. Always trying to remember.
Yes, comes and goes, as we remember and forget. Definitely easier some days!!
Beautiful reading!
Appreciate you saying this Wren. Had to try and find a quiet spot on our camp holiday in France!
Beautiful. «Don’t mess with Texas»! Or in this case do — with love!
Thanks Jonathan, ‘don't mess with the Texas’, I like that. It's quite the place. You might have even inspired me to share this with my 92 old uncle.
Great poem! Thank you for sharing. I grew up on all those same songs. I grew up on that “worry” as well. It’s always a journey to say goodbye to it. Bless you! Keep writing. We need you. 🙏❤️
Thanks for this encouragement Jamie!