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Fotini Masika's avatar

"the honeyed lines / of fragility" got my heart 🖤

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

Thanks, Fotini. As we are.

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rena's avatar

"This is for the journey ahead."

Thank you 🙏

And thank you for including "Fragile" and the concept of Wabi-sabi (how I like to live because the alternative is far too painful).

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

Thanks Rena, it's working title was ‘fragile’ so that could be the delicate fulcrum.

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

If only we could make those repairs... Beautifully.

I especially love the first hope filled four lines Síodhna, I love the connection with Kintsugi and from there the Japanese art of wab! sabi. Thank you for the gentle reminder that perfect isn't necessarily as it was but as it can be. 🤍x

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

Maybe it's a courage thing, or a wisdom thing, or even a hindsight and time thing, but where the Universe nudges the Beauty seems to follow...

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Danielle ⛈️'s avatar

Beautiful!!

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wildflower's avatar

This is so good!!

„let's go back, shall we?

to simpler times—

before cracks

fractured the blend“

Love these lines the most. I really go with the idea of Kintsugi, for me it stands for being broken doesn’t destroy you but can make (parts of) you even more beautiful.

Thank you for sharing!! 🤍

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

Yes, I believe this too, it's a lived experience, not always plain sailing, but ultimately, it's the path… and the light we use as a guide.

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wildflower's avatar

Absolutely true.

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David Donoghue's avatar

A beautiful idea to inspire such interesting writing. I studied Japanese art for a semester in University and I remember being fascinated by this aspect of Japanese pottery. Someone said something about how true progress is usually about how everything that is broken is then mended, how the care you take in repairing is the learning. Something like that. In this way, with that type of pottery the faultlines are the most beautiful part and the bit your eye is focussed on - on what we've learned, how we've repaired our past errors and gotten stronger.

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

Thanks for this reflective response, David. It's both a lived experience and a noticing. I could probably come back to this again. (Thanks for the share!)

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Una Hearne's avatar

utterly fabulous xx

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

Thanks so much Una.

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Orla Fitz's avatar

Gorgeous - these lines really deeply resonated for me "warriors— talking on moonbeams,

walking on ribbons— of parallel thought" - felt like an echo or memory ❤️

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

Thanks Orla, lovely to hear this landed with you. Yes to that.

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Edgar Ballantyne's avatar

Can we visit the home in the sky?

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

I think we're all building this same home, Edgar. What a sight it is! What a feeling to visit it almost every day.

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Edgar Ballantyne's avatar

It begins to feel more real

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Stephanie Sweeney's avatar

Those last two lines of the poem are so moving

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

Thanks for making me notice them too, Stephanie.

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Mahdi Meshkatee's avatar

It is incredible how much a simple word can express. Japanese culture has reminds us of the beauty of/within simplicity, and also of the ephemeral quality of being.

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

Yes Mahdi, those rich words. That culture, the depth.

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C J O'Hare's avatar

Here's to 'skwtching a home in the sky' 👌 beautiful stuff!

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

Here's to that CJ!

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LeeAnn Pickrell's avatar

I'm sketching a home in the sky

from the honeyed lines

of fragility

Just stunning!

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

Thanks for this beautiful comment, LeeAnn

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Sarah Howard Lapine's avatar

"I'm sketching a home in the sky

from the honeyed lines

of fragility"

A sense of longing for home, for safety, in these lines. Really lovely.

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

Lovely interpretation, Sarah. Thank you.

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Cynthia's avatar

Goodness me. You speak to my soul. I love this.

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

That's really lovely to hear, Cynthia

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ville Iso ahola's avatar

Intricate. Words well woven.

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

Thanks Ville!

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